The Farm

2011 Poetry Prize for Freshmen

This year, Exposé awards its first poetry prize, part of our effort to reflect the range of writing by students and scholars across the university community. The winner is Theodoretus Ignatius Breen for his long poem “The Farm.” The judge, Christina Davis of the Woodberry Poetry Room, described Breen as having “immediately evident linguistic gifts.” The poem is set in a blueberry farm in Crownsville, Maryland, where Breen was raised. “My memory of this place is unclear,” says Breen, “and in this work I strive both to clarify the significance of this location and to address the uncertainties of my mind.”

I.

I was born into the baconed ridge
of derelict unpave,
where fig & blueberry 
hung, quietly seeded,
II.

obstinate, as the 
sagging wood—
vertically dried
façade of shack ever 
moistened within by the
unseen concavity
of the grease’sscent
belched forth
from rancid coffer.
III.

That house was not mine, but
that 
of the ancestral
cloistress, not father’s
mother, but mother of mother
not mine 
of brother half
fraternal birthed to same
plot of vaccinium spread.
IV.

There were seven siblings.
And I was but a chrisomer,
the tepid oil’s unctuous 
pungence then obscuring 
in warmth memory,
save for my femoral 
sundering and the wagon
of crippled pull, which I
could falsely recall; 
green-paneled hollowness
of plastic rolled beneath
the border of large house
and the woods, 
the play of light clasping
through leafed ensnare
as when, in darkness, I have
closed my eyes deeply
witnessing the empty patterns.
V.

I returned; years later—
the hermetic woman, 
yet stowing in hickory attic 
the rifle, spoke, 
with unintelligible gaze,
as the jaundiced clippings
of McCarthyan portention scattered forth 
attacked only the settled motes
of fat-laden dust.
I did not sleep there.
VI.  

I slept with father in the
cotted below, unlighted cabin
festering with arachnid creep
ever close to ear and seen in 
leaving day with
opisthosomatic swell,
ciliated, filled with venom
& obliviate disdain for
our elevation as
we slept in loft reached
only by the ladder.
VII.

The cabin was below,
in the forest which now
I have seen, 
approached by the rutted
path of vehicles unknown,
bordered by wildflower,
passing kempt field &
prickled briar, isthmus
of grass amidst trodden 
dirt followed by self and
father and siblings who 
slept apart.
VIII.

Was Ambrose there?
IX.

And beneath the tall trees 
sarsaparilla weaved
amongst black soil kissing
brown leaves to rot as we
bent and I placed the root  
into mouth, viscous 
sweet unsettlingly twinged
with bitterness,
crudely mixed with earth
beside the cabin.
X.

The descent continued,
though we could not,
fall of leaf loudly dragged
further by steep incline
until rushed by lowest ravine,
drowning long-smoothed rock
as strain of penetrate light
falling prey to the encompassing 
brown
rusted arbitrarily the spots dictated
by the foliaged negligence.
XI.

The rope swing was the center 
of all,
the branches & ravine & cabin & decay & sarsaparilla 
& grease & descent & rifle &
I clutched the twined cords of browning white
hearing the polish of rock trickle fifty feet below.
XII.

I yearned for
above the chasm;

my siblings did not mind,
though they stood amidst
death echoed yet in sinuous
batter of the lapping water,
originated by light pull of
hand gracing curved metal
ever surrounded by wood
now surrounded by tilted
hickory, and perhaps the
sound could be heard from
where it now rests, but all
is now past, their mother
not mine I had never met,
neither in memory nor false.
XIII.

Once, by accident,
I knew, that Ambrose
had released the rope,
but as his mother.

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This year, Exposé awards its first poetry prize, part of our effort to reflect the range of writing by students and scholars across the university community. The winner is Theodoretus Ignatius Breen for his long poem “The Farm.” The judge, Christina Davis of the Woodberry Poetry Room, described Breen as having “immediately evident linguistic gifts.” The poem is set in a blueberry farm in Crownsville, Maryland, where Breen was raised. “My memory of this place is unclear,” says Breen, “and in this work I strive both to clarify the significance of this location and to address the uncertainties of my mind.”

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